Unbroken

I know god himself made someone special from the darkest cave in the hidden dark Woods to send down to others for them to see Also dream how she or life really is especial feeling right. 
Hold my hand until the end of time, squeeze it tight, dont flench, our promises we make we know we dont break the arrow of feeling a invisible soul. 
The arrow went straight through the heart, almost tore my conscious into threads. 
As i sit with time endless worrys deep down into my mind . 
I found out WHO I am , guess thats whyveyone seems to push me away 
A big markable light of flame, my soul is sweet n tender 
I was broken now I understand my inter self in time before i return to my kingdom of solitary peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/30/2017 6:45:00 AM
Another beautiful poem, it s again really deep and really beautifully written, poetry is all about been deep and clear and you ve done a very good job in each and every poem of yours, your every poem is better than one another,
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 10/2/2017 12:01:00 PM
:)))) god bless you
Date: 9/17/2017 2:55:00 PM
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:29:00 AM
ok ... we really like what you did with this piece ... a couple of grammar issues ... your last line is stellar ... though we feel you would be more comfortable in a queendom ? ... ok ... you comment on my next write . .. . queendom come ... because of you ... hey ... you do good word work ... write on . .. .
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