Unbroken

Mountain river less frigid,
frozen waterfalls crack 
Ice spear impales torso
entering through his back 
Perished upon a skewer
preserved neatly stacked 
Unseen inside the ravine 
a glazier starts to attack

Grinding away on boulders 
down gully's, erosion tracks 
His lifeless body still inside 
is gradually turning black 
800 years doing hard time 
ice tomb at last goes slack
Releases a lifelong prisoner
Worse for wear, fully intact 

''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
11/14/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 11/20/2021 8:15:00 AM
Well done David! I think we all would be amazed at what lies under our feet. Congrats on your win!!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/20/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Mark, indeed the arctic regions, are revealing the secrets that have been buried for millennia, not sure if it’s a good thing, cheers David
Date: 11/16/2021 1:45:00 PM
David, wonderful writing that leaves one pondering and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/16/2021 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Constance, I really have no idea how this one even came about, apart from your prompt, and my dark imagination, nevertheless I'm delighted with the placement, cheers David
Date: 11/15/2021 2:50:00 AM
With climate change and global warming I wonder what other secrets the ground will give up. Enjoy your week ahead David. Tom
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/15/2021 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Tom, yes indeed we might get more than we bargained for, from the great melt, perhaps some ancient trapped virus will release, nobody knows, cheers David
Date: 11/14/2021 8:24:00 PM
You've crafted a fantastic poem, David one that's chock-full of beautiful metaphors and rhyme. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/15/2021 12:20:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad, every now and then the glaziers give up some secrets that's been hidden within in them for eons, unfortunately they are becoming more like past relics themselves as the planet heats up, cheers David
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