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Unbroken

Mountain river less frigid, frozen waterfalls crack Ice spear impales torso entering through his back Perished upon a skewer preserved neatly stacked Unseen inside the ravine a glazier starts to attack Grinding away on boulders down gully's, erosion tracks His lifeless body still inside is gradually turning black 800 years doing hard time ice tomb at last goes slack Releases a lifelong prisoner Worse for wear, fully intact ''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 11/14/21

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Mark Koplin

Date: 11/20/2021 8:15:00 AM

Well done David! I think we all would be amazed at what lies under our feet. Congrats on your win!!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/20/2021 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Mark, indeed the arctic regions, are revealing the secrets that have been buried for millennia, not sure if it’s a good thing, cheers David

Constance La France

Date: 11/16/2021 1:45:00 PM

David, wonderful writing that leaves one pondering and congratulations on your Third Place win in my "U" Contest, New Poems ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/16/2021 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Constance, I really have no idea how this one even came about, apart from your prompt, and my dark imagination, nevertheless I'm delighted with the placement, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/15/2021 2:50:00 AM

With climate change and global warming I wonder what other secrets the ground will give up. Enjoy your week ahead David. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/15/2021 3:21:00 AM

Thank you Tom, yes indeed we might get more than we bargained for, from the great melt, perhaps some ancient trapped virus will release, nobody knows, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2021 8:24:00 PM

You've crafted a fantastic poem, David one that's chock-full of beautiful metaphors and rhyme. Best wishes in the contest

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/15/2021 12:20:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad, every now and then the glaziers give up some secrets that's been hidden within in them for eons, unfortunately they are becoming more like past relics themselves as the planet heats up, cheers David