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Unbridled Youth

Pleased as punch This mother quite proud Flips up her tail Neighing out loud Her gait so lively Her head held high This bright young fella Once a gleam in her eye Unbridled spirit Feeling so grand The spitting image Of his dear old man Romping through fields Free of reins Thundering hoofs Flying mane A frisky young colt Like dad in his day Who was quite a stud They were heard to say Then back to the barn When day is done This spirited young colt Was born to run Resting for a while Batteries recharged Chomping at the bit A spirit so large Such unbridled youth Exuberance defined This pesky young colt It's his moment to shine ©Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 3/27/2016 7:38:00 PM
Wow, Jack!!! I love this verse right here. Such a beautiful story you've written! "Romping through fields Free of reins Thundering hoofs Flying mane " Beautiful imagery throughout too...amazing work...I love this kind of poetry. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/27/2016 9:16:00 PM
WOW!!! Can I be your friend??? You make me feel SO SO SO good!!! Love, Jackson xoxox

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