Unbridled Desire

fresh linen
and jasmine
gently caress
the air

sheets whisper
to the floor,
with abandon
searching lips
find an orb

traveling fingers
part the way
legs jelly
and feet tingle
the lighting rod
is stroked

all sane movement
ceased, tremors pass
into the centre of desire
shuddering I am loosed 

a ragged breath
lifts wayward hair
slicked in lust
and splayed 
I wished
I had a smoke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Callus Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Having a peep at your past poems, Jayne; this sure is unbridled and sensual. Give it a top rating. // paul
Eggins Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 9:44 AM
aww thank you Paul, I am just roaming around I might go have a look at what else you have been writing :) thanks for the interest its surprising but appreciated big smile...love Jayne x
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:16 AM
A lovely poem, thank you Jayne. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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