Kim Rodrigues Poet Imagism

Unbridled

the white horse drives our wild hides
          galloping at a breathtaking stride

through golden sand, shimmering diamonds,
             borne in the salted sea air.  splashes

of Caribbean blue ride the haunches of fur
                frenetically free with tenacious pride.

two hearts pound, unbridled - brittle years
                    sculpted into a fine figurine, never broken.

6/21/2019
YOUR CHOICE(12) LOVE VERSE,any form or theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Geoffrey Brewer June 22, 2019 at 10:00 PM Radiant imagery, stimulating and delighting the imagination; beautifully conceived and formed. Congratulations, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2019 at 10:27 PM Thank you, Geoffrey!

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2019 at 7:29 PM beautiful imagery, Kim. Thanks for your sweet comment on my Ku Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2019 at 7:33 PM Thank you, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Winged Warrior June 22, 2019 at 8:20 AM Excellent entry my friend...bol...^WW^ Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2019 at 7:34 PM Thank you, WW! Hugs...Kim

Arturo Michael June 22, 2019 at 4:07 AM Can you ride the white horse...creative.... Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2019 at 7:24 AM Thanks so much, my friend! Hugs...Kim

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 21, 2019 at 8:44 AM Oh, fantastic, I can almost feel it. x Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2019 at 9:11 AM Thanks,Maureen!

Caren Krutsinger June 21, 2019 at 7:06 AM Beautifully and exquisitely, written, Kim. A winner in my eyes! Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2019 at 7:09 AM Thanks so much!