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Unborn Tanka

I’ve seen the freezers where they store the mother’s eggs where the unborn sleep cradled in maternal dreams cribs of baby fantasies

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2015 10:07:00 AM

soupmail if you are able to see this, Susan

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/15/2014 10:36:00 AM

Oh this is brilliant, hope you are still around,

Jack Horne

Date: 5/18/2014 1:43:00 PM

love this clever tanka. Thanks very much - great contest : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2014 8:29:00 PM

If Carrie thinks this is excellent, you can be sure it is!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/16/2014 10:10:00 AM

Wow.............this one is excellent......you are so gifted in this form of poetry! And I am honored that my vase poem made your list as a worthy antique. Thank you very much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2014 10:17:00 AM

Hola, Susan..... Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2014 2:17:00 PM

a wonderfully profound tanka , Susan . CAn't believe I had missed it!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/24/2014 9:49:00 AM

Profound expressions, Susan

Tim Smith

Date: 4/24/2014 8:25:00 AM

I was almost afraid to look at this one because of the title but I am glad I did....So many couples would give anything to have the loving sounds of a baby in their home...beautiful write Susan