Unblocked

blinded by restraints
I tread upon new grasslands
swayed in virgin dew
my world changes hues
greeting positive musings 
with rarest of hue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 11, 2016 at 7:51 PM
nice to see this one again, glad you were unblocked. SKAT
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February 18, 2016 at 11:43 AM
ZELENA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 5, 2015 at 9:59 PM
Zelene, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
Kimathi Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 5:59 PM
A wonderful piece to read to raise once spirits high or to start a new day. Congrats to your placement Zelene! ;-)
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2015 at 2:45 AM
i feel reborn, zelene... congrats on your senryu win!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Deep senryus zelene! Congrats on awesome win!
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September 16, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Congratz! Keep going!
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