Unblocked

blinded by restraints I tread upon new grasslands swayed in virgin dew my world changes hues greeting positive musings with enlightenment Senryu On Cellular Reality 8 Sept 2015

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Skat A

Date: 6/11/2016 7:51:00 PM

nice to see this one again, glad you were unblocked. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 11:43:00 AM

ZELENA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 9:59:00 PM

Zelene, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/19/2015 5:59:00 PM

A wonderful piece to read to raise once spirits high or to start a new day. Congrats to your placement Zelene! ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2015 2:45:00 AM

i feel reborn, zelene... congrats on your senryu win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/16/2015 11:26:00 PM

Deep senryus zelene! Congrats on awesome win!

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 9/16/2015 7:42:00 PM

Congratz! Keep going!