Unblinking Third Eye

Unblinking Third Eye 


    Unblinking third eye!
    The serene sublime soul shines
     watching mind and brain,
     giving errand to entwine
      emotion and ambition.

       Unblinking third eye!
      sends rays piercing mind-brain
      guarding and guiding
      on action-interaction 
      directing for unison.
      
      


  07/16/22

Pick -A-Title Vol. 31

Contest by Edward Ibeh

Title chosen ‘Unblinking Third Eye’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:34 PM
I'm not much into these things but I think you got it right with your concise tanka. Best of luck in the contest.
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