Unbearable Beauty In Black

Her black long gown covered her all,
     Neckline designed with a beautiful lace.
Even the satin scarf matched her attire,
     Shimmering skin and a beautiful face.

She appeared glued to garden bench,
     As it slightly drizzled, she didn't leave.
While breeze played with her curly hair,
     I smiled, but no response did I receive.

Her perfect black eyes touched my soul,
     I imagined her as fairy tale princess.
Could she be from a different planet?
     Silently stared at her long black dress.

She felt the bench with both hands,
     And then something she tried to find.
Behind the bench she grabbed walk stick,
     I was shocked to know she was blind.

The only color she knew was black,
     And her day was as dark as the night.
I admired her courage and beauty in black,
     She left, watched her until out of sight.     




Nov 8, 2016.
UNBEARABLE BEAUTY IN__(Pick a Color) - Poetry Contest 
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Date: 12/20/2016 12:43:00 PM
did the two poems black/white wrong way round, two different poems, both great this one paints a picture , 2nd stanza bit scary stephen
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Date: 11/8/2016 4:18:00 AM
Very well done ... enjoyed reading ... good luck ...
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Date: 11/8/2016 1:37:00 AM
This is a touching write, Meenakshi and reads like a winner to me:)
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Date: 11/8/2016 1:29:00 AM
very touching and true.
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