Unbearable Beauty In Black

Unbearable Beauty in Black

The light has fallen down the endless solid cliffs
                         dejected there it sparkles lures on impact’s flight

Gunshots from a black revolver six shiny bullets
                             one bright explosion flashes mindless radiance

The hangman darkly clothed in jester’s gown
                                   mocks tarred and feathered un-dyed blaze

A dose of over un-pigmented pills and pillage
                           sweet dreams of quiet and one last muddy void

Black is unbearable the pastel brush demised
                                 but after thunder slowly comes the rainbow

A sentinel cries crisis please do not head the call
                         the change of guards disguised in shining armour

Requires holding on to blackness’ shielding voice
                             until unbearable becomes bearable once more

Pitch-miserable epiphany shouts when you cannot
                   want not paint no more yet flaking scraps find colour

Once you resist seductive guile beheading escapades
                 embrace depression as your strongest torch of change
  

07th November 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/10/2016 9:48:00 PM
many congrats on your win in the contest Kai
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/11/2016 2:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Francine. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/10/2016 1:32:00 PM
Many congrat's on your win with this sensational piece, Kai. Elaine
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/11/2016 2:36:00 AM
Thanks a lot for reading and liking. Kai
Date: 11/7/2016 3:54:00 PM
From reading this one, I would say you already have a very fine vocabulary, Kai, but glad you learned a new word with gossamer. it's such a poetic word!
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Date: 11/11/2016 2:36:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 11/7/2016 3:22:00 AM
lovely expression - liked it very much
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/11/2016 2:34:00 AM
Thank you Susan for reading and liking. Many wishes, kai
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