Unawares

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Written on September 17, 2023

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Blushing smiles erase shadowed pasts
Filling hearts with music that lasts
Someday, somewhere, breathless prayers
Comfort hearts and souls He prepares ~
Rousing heaven’s enthusiasts

Dewlike tears, gentle love forecasts
Recalling when we were outcasts
Kindness trembles, she clearly cares
	Blushing smiles…

Shyly whispers love that outlasts
Breathless moments, wholehearted blasts
Some have known angels, unawares
Wonderous love that heaven shares
Blue skies, sighs of faith never fasts ~
	Blushing smiles….

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/22/2023 1:13:00 AM

Kindness trembles..: your way with words is so beautiful and flows seamlessly . Absolutely stunning and heartfelt write this is. Congratulations

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2023 6:01:00 PM

Dear Gina, your exceptional piece on a complex subject was truly enlightening. The vivid imagery, skillful employment of metaphors, and compelling arguments showcased in your writing are truly magnificent. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 11:05:00 AM

I've not seen this form in a while and youve done it so well.. some interesting lines that make it personal, like 'recalling when we were outcasts... its quite poetic with lovley imagery in the last stanza..