Regina Mcintosh Poet Rondeau

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Written on September 17, 2023

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Unawares

Blushing smiles erase shadowed pasts
Filling hearts with music that lasts
Someday, somewhere, breathless prayers
Comfort hearts and souls He prepares ~
Rousing heaven’s enthusiasts

Dewlike tears, gentle love forecasts
Recalling when we were outcasts
Kindness trembles, she clearly cares
	Blushing smiles…

Shyly whispers love that outlasts
Breathless moments, wholehearted blasts
Some have known angels, unawares
Wonderous love that heaven shares
Blue skies, sighs of faith never fasts ~
	Blushing smiles….

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Ink Empress September 22, 2023 at 1:13 AM Kindness trembles..: your way with words is so beautiful and flows seamlessly . Absolutely stunning and heartfelt write this is. Congratulations

Sotto Poet September 21, 2023 at 6:01 PM Dear Gina, your exceptional piece on a complex subject was truly enlightening. The vivid imagery, skillful employment of metaphors, and compelling arguments showcased in your writing are truly magnificent. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Silent One September 17, 2023 at 11:05 AM I've not seen this form in a while and youve done it so well.. some interesting lines that make it personal, like 'recalling when we were outcasts... its quite poetic with lovley imagery in the last stanza..