Unawares

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Written on September 17, 2023

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Blushing smiles erase shadowed pasts Filling hearts with music that lasts Someday, somewhere, breathless prayers Comfort hearts and souls He prepares ~ Rousing heaven’s enthusiasts Dewlike tears, gentle love forecasts Recalling when we were outcasts Kindness trembles, she clearly cares Blushing smiles… Shyly whispers love that outlasts Breathless moments, wholehearted blasts Some have known angels, unawares Wonderous love that heaven shares Blue skies, sighs of faith never fasts ~ Blushing smiles….

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/22/2023 1:13:00 AM

Kindness trembles..: your way with words is so beautiful and flows seamlessly . Absolutely stunning and heartfelt write this is. Congratulations

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/21/2023 6:01:00 PM

Dear Gina, your exceptional piece on a complex subject was truly enlightening. The vivid imagery, skillful employment of metaphors, and compelling arguments showcased in your writing are truly magnificent. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/17/2023 2:02:00 PM

You had me with the first line. It was magnificent as did 'breathless prayers.' Kindness trembles = a personification gem. Well done, sir.

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 11:05:00 AM

I've not seen this form in a while and youve done it so well.. some interesting lines that make it personal, like 'recalling when we were outcasts... its quite poetic with lovley imagery in the last stanza..