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Unattainable Dream

I thought it was love, But it wasn’t. I thought it was joy, But it was sadness. I thought it was pleasure, But it was pain. I thought it was ecstasy, But it was a dream.

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Tracy Anderson

Date: 7/28/2009 11:58:00 PM

I love this on and sometimes it is the lesson we learn that is the greatest gift and these are the roads that lead us to our dreams. I hope you find yours you are a wonderful soul. Love ya Tracy

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:46:00 PM

My favorite poem...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/27/2009 3:23:00 PM

Please forgive my sarcasm but, this sounds more like a nightmare ... LOL ... wonderful write here Steve and now that it is a "first round survivor" ... good luck in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 5:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Steve. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/31/2009 11:20:00 PM

Congrats on your feature, I really enjoy reading this poem, it brings a lot of truth to the opposite nature of things. Great job...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2009 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being chosen to feature this week Steve. May you have many more excellent poems featured. Love, Carol

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/27/2009 5:45:00 PM

Beautiful poem, I have felt this way many times over, you get caught up in what it appears to be and not reality..sadly expressed but penned very well..Stay strong and wait on the lord to send you all the blessings he has in store for you..God Bless and Congratulations on being featured this week..*Tyesha

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/27/2009 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful featured write of the week! Love, Shar

Jonathan White

Date: 1/26/2009 6:13:00 PM

This is sooooo true. I've felt the same way, and actually wrote a few poems of the sort myself. Congrats on the feature

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/26/2009 9:18:00 AM

Congrats Steve on "unattainable Dream" being featured. Vince

Date: 1/25/2009 4:54:00 PM

Simply stated but effective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2009 1:33:00 PM

Hope your dreams will someday come true! Congratulations on your featured work! ~ Carrie

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/16/2008 5:20:00 PM

Night dreams can somtimes be deceiving.................Nice write

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/14/2008 11:49:00 AM

This is a good poem too, I like the way you describe the feelings and end it with a dream. I have dreams that seem so real and I'm glad they're dreams. DN

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/13/2008 11:54:00 PM

That's why I have learned to stay out of the love trap... I now enjoy close friendships with no commitments, but then I'm 60 years old! It's most likely different for you... good luck my friend! Best wishes, your grandfather!

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/13/2008 1:09:00 PM

Beauitful poem, of how you thought it was but it wasn't. Love Elizabeth

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/13/2008 7:06:00 AM

Aw, so sorry for your heartache. Perhaps a stepping stone to something real and wonderful. Dreams do come true. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/13/2008 1:42:00 AM

These are great thoughts you have penned here. Love the imagery and concept...Raul