Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

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October 27, 2023
Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 21 Poetry Contest; Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Unassailable Purity

Unassailable purity, a cognition divine of venerated mind,
Proffers promise inviolable, beneficence sacred aligned,
With force invincible emanating from goodwill of heart
Forming precepts impeccable, teachings benevolent impart.

Purity of thought and action~ a worthy and righteous goal,
Resounds indomitable from kindred voice of resolute soul;
A heavenly call of compassion, extolling sanctity of love,
Lifting tenor of gloomy dawns~ soothing refrains of dove.

Unassailable purity in life, a road map of directions to hope,
Sacrosanct are its valiant acts, vowing ceaselessly to cope,
Performing with mighty resolve, deeds inducing pride;
Serving humbly as invisible hand of irreproachable guide.

Assisting destitute is the sermon, tolling bells of prayer,
Beckoning the weary, indigent, to shelter and welfare;
Comforting grief of despair with words enlightened, aware,
Consoling cry of nothingness, bequeathing love and care.

It exemplifies within her selfless smile, purity of her eyes,
Reassuring her children, bliss of mother’s love never dies;
Its rectitude unassailable, eternal as the reign of time,
A gift precious, paramount to life~ ethereal and sublime.

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Bill Baker November 16, 2023 at 3:40 PM Nice entry for the contest, Vijay. Your description of the sermon was excellent, my friend. We need more sermons like this one. Good luck in the contest! Bill

Christuraj Alex November 10, 2023 at 4:45 AM Your work is very grand as usual. "gift precious, paramount to life~ ethereal and sublime" - great definition of unassailable Purity. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh November 9, 2023 at 7:50 PM Absolute gem, Vijay. Your never fail to amaze with your poetry and vocabulary. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest

Judy Ball November 3, 2023 at 7:04 AM This is lovely Vijay. I read this as a tribute to a mother. Beautifully done as always. Love it. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar October 29, 2023 at 9:13 AM A wonderful poem that excels in every department, like diction, rhyme, imagery, and subject matter. Blessings. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 6:11 AM So nice of you to say so, Victor. Always an honor when you visit. Many, many thanks.

Brandy Nicole October 28, 2023 at 7:13 PM "Serving humbly as invisible hand of irreproachable guide." This thought touches my heart deeply. It's so beautiful and uplifting, Vijay. Such a wonderful feeling, indeed. Your thoughts are tender and spiritual, all at the same time, holding so much meaning and depth. My best to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 6:10 AM Always a joy to read your thoughts my dear friend. Your presence on my page is much appreciated, Brandy--and your remarks are much valued. Many thanks. Hugs to you as well.

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 28, 2023 at 3:56 PM An exquisitely beautiful poem, Vijay! The images and rhyming are exceptional. This is a fave. :) Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 6:08 AM To hear that from you is quite special and so is your FAVE, my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks, Evelyn.

Silent One October 28, 2023 at 9:26 AM It exemplifies within her selfless smile, purity of her eyes, Reassuring her children, bliss of mother’s love never dies; Its rectitude unassailable, eternal as the reign of time, A gift precious, paramount to life~ ethereal and sublime... Great last stanza.. this poem rhymes and flows so well as do all your poems.. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 6:07 AM Always honored by your feedback and your presence on Soup, my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, SO. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet October 27, 2023 at 1:13 PM What a beautiful poem you've composed, Vijay. Being able to articulate a wide range of feelings is a tremendous skill. The rhythm is lovely, the lines are deep and thoughtful, and the diction is excellent. Well-executed literary flair complements the vivid imagery and thought-provoking spiritual matter. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 6:05 AM I am amazed by your rewarding presence on Soup---delightful comments everywhere you visit. Much appreciate your insights, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Ink Empress October 27, 2023 at 12:17 PM A spiritual poem that speaks so much. I love the way you’ve defined purity! And Mothers love, as theres nothing as pure as that in my heart and eyes. I love the way you always rhyme! I admire them so creative and catchy always. And the flow is beautiful with such profound lines with brilliant diction! I love especially the ending in this poem! How soulful! You always write so well Vijay! I am so glad i get to read poets like you on soup! Fave for me this is Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 6:03 AM You are so very kind, my friend. Your thoughtful comments on Soup always project goodwill on every page you visit. I am thankful for your presence on my page, Ink. Heartfelt thanks for your FAVE and your gleeful energy.

Gordon Mcconnell October 27, 2023 at 12:12 PM Nice piece Vijay with good rhyme and flow and really insightful too. Blessings,Gordon Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 5:59 AM Glad to see you again, Gordon. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Jay Narain October 27, 2023 at 9:52 AM Nice spiritual poem. Like last two stanza, practical for our lives. Vijay Pandit October 30, 2023 at 5:58 AM Thank you Jay--much appreciate.