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Unanswered

There was little I could say and much I could not. Water droplets slid down the breath stained window as windshield wipers refrained from their purpose. The gibbous moon withdrew from view, light stifled by douglas firs thrashing, but I don't recall when it drifted. Inside four motionless doors alone, moans had no escape. Rain banged angrily upon the glass like an unanswered knock. Each drop held my eyes then fell from their reach. My tears mirrored in a fog, my grasp uninhabited. 11-21-2020

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Date: 12/2/2020 2:05:00 PM
Juliet, your poignant pen shines in the sad anguish of your poem. Deep, emotional beauty. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest.. ~Susan
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/2/2020 7:59:00 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 11/21/2020 4:54:00 PM
Poignant and powerful.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/21/2020 10:01:00 PM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 11/21/2020 11:49:00 AM
This one is so deeply emotive.. I could feel the anguish in your words.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/21/2020 8:17:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. This one was inspired by a photo you had for one of your contests. I didn't get around to writing it in time.

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