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Unaffected Voyeur

Red robins hunt among leaves Last snowbird arrivals revel in sunlight Shuffling for acorns ‘neath Live Oak trees Finding a treat, a scurry they incite Tangled wings, feathers flying Squirrel approaches undetected Amid the din of birds fighting, crying Nut eaten by a voyeur unaffected
*Entry for Brian’s “Show Me” Contest. Written January 10, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/21/2012 3:05:00 PM
Love this witty piece, my friend
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:18:00 PM
I LOVE it! Of course, you know I would...living out here with the birds and all. You have definitely painted a picture. Big Smiles and LOTS of love!
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Date: 1/12/2012 6:15:00 PM
Cheers to the VOYEUR! What a cute little story. For some reason, it took me to a Bobby Dylan song "Tangled Up In Blue" I love B.Dylan...and OF COURSE I DIGG YOU, CAROLYN! Hope to hear from you soon....SMILE!
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:06:00 AM
Quite a stunning image you captured with your words Carolyn.. Congratulations hun.. How are you doing? love Wilma
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:25:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Carolyn.... I have missed your poetry lately.... hope your Xmas and new years was a good one... luv n hugs all day for you Michael
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn, on your HM. Maureen :)
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:21:00 PM
Enjoyed this Carolyn. Congratulations
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:57:00 PM
this was so cute how you had that little animal sneaking in there while the birds fight. Congrats on the win, Carolyn. HOpe you are ok lately?
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:17:00 PM
Crows are the theives in my yard. Congratulations.Hope you are feeling well. I miss hearing from you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:46:00 PM
Great! I see this everyday in my backyard. The Blue Jays are regular thieves, steal things by diverting attention. Love, daver
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:09:00 PM
What a great, creative write here Carolyn! The poor birds have to do without because they were fighting...but kudos to the squirrel, he wins!!Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:28:00 PM
The best to you my friend in Brian's contest. Have a great day Carolyn. Love, Carol
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