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When I let one loose in the elevator
The monk adjacent profusely apologised
The thunder, he affirmed, gift of the Creator
Inhaling it deeply would see divine light realised

Though the mood lightened, kerchiefs were out
Trapped within, behind the moving lifts door 
Embarrassed no more, mind free of doubt
I loudly requested him for an encore

31-July-2021

When I Let One Loose In The Elevator Poetry Contest
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Indiana Shaw August 6, 2021 at 7:24 AM Ha, ha, ha, it had me gassing . . . ; ) Unseeking Seeker August 6, 2021 at 7:57 AM :)

Kim Rodrigues July 31, 2021 at 10:06 AM LOL! Very funny! Unseeking Seeker July 31, 2021 at 8:41 PM :)

Alexis Y. July 31, 2021 at 9:38 AM Lol! Seeker, This is hilarious. Good title, content and photo. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Unseeking Seeker July 31, 2021 at 9:47 AM Thanks Alexis! Good change for me too, from my usual contemplations :)