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When I let one loose in the elevator The monk adjacent profusely apologised The thunder, he affirmed, gift of the Creator Inhaling it deeply would see divine light realised Though the mood lightened, kerchiefs were out Trapped within, behind the moving lifts door Embarrassed no more, mind free of doubt I loudly requested him for an encore 31-July-2021 When I Let One Loose In The Elevator Poetry Contest Sponsor: charles messina

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Date: 8/6/2021 7:24:00 AM
Ha, ha, ha, it had me gassing . . . ; )
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Date: 8/6/2021 7:57:00 AM
:)
Date: 7/31/2021 10:06:00 AM
LOL! Very funny!
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Date: 7/31/2021 8:41:00 PM
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Date: 7/31/2021 9:38:00 AM
Lol! Seeker, This is hilarious. Good title, content and photo. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/31/2021 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! Good change for me too, from my usual contemplations :)

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