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Un Sustain Able

wielding blunt weapons soul peddling at the cross road to be the greatest ***

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Bette Bavington

Date: 6/9/2020 1:31:00 PM

This is awesome. I am just struggling to show people me. There is nothing in being the greatest if I lose sight as to who I am.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/10/2020 7:10:00 AM

Amen to that! I am particularly me ;), took a while to embrace that, turns out it is so much easier than trying to be someone you are not. Thank you so much Bette! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/29/2020 8:14:00 PM

This has inspired me to write my first senryu, so thank you!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/29/2020 8:47:00 PM

Wowsah! That brilliant ink I just read?! Thank YOU Michelle! I am thrilled. Not to mention I totally identified with your Senryu ;), xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/29/2020 2:28:00 AM

Very thought-provoking per usual your provocateur ink style, PT! With love and more love always.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/29/2020 4:52:00 PM

I do put the mo in less is mo ;), Thank you dear Freddie! Warm hugs n' love, xomo!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/26/2020 4:13:00 PM

well said, maureen! i wonder who decided that being the greatest was worth striving for at any cost...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/27/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Ilene! I'm still trying to figure out what "greatest" means, definitively ;), I hope you and yours are well ~x

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/26/2020 2:56:00 PM

Able was I ere I saw Un Sustain Able! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/26/2020 2:58:00 PM

Your eyes are as wide and open as is your mind my friend. RSD ~xomo

Joseph May

Date: 5/26/2020 12:55:00 PM

Very nicely done Mo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/26/2020 2:20:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Take care, xomo

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 5/26/2020 7:27:00 AM

And with the blunt weapons, blunt force trauma on a massive scale. Sharp ink, if I might borrow your words.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/26/2020 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence. The pros know that if you do it right they'll never know what hit them. Take care my poetry friend, xomo