Un Poquito

Her love began
as a little bit
then slowly
began to snowball...

She appeared
as a snowflake...

Gently descending
upon my hill
beginning to roll
slowly downwards...

I took notice
gathering her up...

With sculpting hands
clumped her together
three dimensional affections
length, width and height..

Rolled and clumped
she took form...

Silly carrot nose
two chocolate chip
cookies for eyes
a raisin smile...

Little by little
I love her more each day...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 9:36 PM
ahhh, this is so so sweet!!! It's so great to meet new poets. Well, you must have been here a while now but I hope to see many more of your poems. Finally getting off here for the night!!!
Carroll Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Thank you Andrea!
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