Umbrellas

Useful on rainy days Underneath ashen skies Unleashed springs awaken; Upthrust in defiance. Unobserved by others Undercover kisses Utilise their shelter. 31.04.21 ' Pleiades U' Contest sponsored by Kim Merryman syllable check by ear

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/25/2021 7:58:00 PM

What a superb write, Wendy. You've captured the utilitarian + amorous uses of the umbrella beautifully. A true winner in my book. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2021 7:30:00 AM

Great item to have on hand to prevent getting totally soaked unless it is a windy day then who knows what will happen. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 7:21:00 PM

Very sweet,Wendy! I'm glad everything worked out. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:26:00 PM

excellent poem Wendy i also considered writing about umbrellas! Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Wendy Watson
Date: 5/3/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan. One would certainly have been useful today in my part of the world!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations!

Wendy Watson
Date: 5/3/2021 3:39:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment,Alex.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/30/2021 1:59:00 PM

Wendy, I have read several of these today and I finally found one I could understand. Good luck, reads like a winner:)

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/30/2021 2:01:00 PM

Thank you so much for taking time out to read and comment,Daniel. My first attempt at this form so I appreciate the encouragement! It's a boring topic maybe but one which we can all relate to!