Umbrella

Find protection under its dome As those raindrops come pouring down When the scorching sun starts to roam Find protection under its dome A parasol beneath the gloam When those rainy days come around Find protection under its dome As those raindrops come pouring down ----------------

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2023 10:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joseph - Great written :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/14/2023 1:07:00 PM

Back with congratulations on you twin with your wonderful umbrella Triolet Joseph… Belke

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/14/2023 12:17:00 PM

Joseph, back with congratulations on your win! There is a unique irony in reading your poem today as we are supposed to get an unusual August shower today! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2023 8:39:00 AM

Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a great day with your win............

Valsa George

Date: 8/13/2023 8:34:00 PM

An umbrella is a sure friend of ours in sun and rain. Initially I too had thought of writing on Umbrella. A beautiful triolet ! Congratulations on your first place win... dear Joseph !

The Situation

Date: 8/13/2023 4:32:00 PM

I doubt if Riannah will have a complaint with this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2023 2:00:00 PM

super cool. That was the first U word that came to my mind before i thought to do a V word instead. Hope you got a good win.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/11/2023 7:11:00 PM

Yes, the umbrella protects in many ways. My favorite would be: from falling raindrops. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/11/2023 1:18:00 AM

Well done, love this:)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/10/2023 11:01:00 PM

A fine triolet Joseph, we cannot do without an umbrella whatever the weather. Be there sunshine or rain, the umbrella goes up again… Belle

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/10/2023 3:28:00 PM

A friend in need--they sure protect us from rain and sun. Nicely delivered, Joseph.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2023 1:41:00 PM

A creative/fun write. "Good Luck" I also did "Umbrella." Have a great day.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/10/2023 12:39:00 PM

Having grown up in the pacific NW, we carried umbrellas like purses or backpacks in all kinds of colors and patterns. This brings back delightful memories of walking in the rain, Joseph! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.