Joseph May Poet Triolet

Umbrella

Find protection under its dome
  As those raindrops come pouring down
  When the scorching sun starts to roam
 Find protection under its dome
  A parasol beneath the gloam
 When those rainy days come around
   Find protection under its dome
 As those raindrops come pouring down
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Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 10:44 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joseph - Great written :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds August 14, 2023 at 1:07 PM Back with congratulations on you twin with your wonderful umbrella Triolet Joseph… Belke

Sam Kauffman August 14, 2023 at 12:17 PM Joseph, back with congratulations on your win! There is a unique irony in reading your poem today as we are supposed to get an unusual August shower today! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2023 at 8:39 AM Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a great day with your win............

Valsa George August 13, 2023 at 8:34 PM An umbrella is a sure friend of ours in sun and rain. Initially I too had thought of writing on Umbrella. A beautiful triolet ! Congratulations on your first place win... dear Joseph !

The Situation August 13, 2023 at 4:32 PM I doubt if Riannah will have a complaint with this.

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2023 at 2:00 PM super cool. That was the first U word that came to my mind before i thought to do a V word instead. Hope you got a good win.

Brandy Nicole August 11, 2023 at 7:11 PM Yes, the umbrella protects in many ways. My favorite would be: from falling raindrops. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joanna Daniel August 11, 2023 at 1:18 AM Well done, love this:)

Beryl Edmonds August 10, 2023 at 11:01 PM A fine triolet Joseph, we cannot do without an umbrella whatever the weather. Be there sunshine or rain, the umbrella goes up again… Belle

Vijay Pandit August 10, 2023 at 3:28 PM A friend in need--they sure protect us from rain and sun. Nicely delivered, Joseph.

Paula Goldsmith August 10, 2023 at 1:41 PM A creative/fun write. "Good Luck" I also did "Umbrella." Have a great day.............

Sam Kauffman August 10, 2023 at 12:39 PM Having grown up in the pacific NW, we carried umbrellas like purses or backpacks in all kinds of colors and patterns. This brings back delightful memories of walking in the rain, Joseph! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.