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Umbrella

Under the umbrella rainbows glean my love I dance with raindrops. Quote by _Poet Rainy day, great feeling with my fella Heavenly rainbow dance upon my heart Always blooming beneath my umbrella Rainy day, great feeling with my fella Romantic sound singing a cappella Pave moment, a love trail never apart Rainy day, great feeling with my fella Heavenly rainbow dance upon my heart 11/3/2022 Writing Challenge - Unburden A ''U'' Word- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/22/2022 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend. The cadence of your words in the triolet form matches the rhythmic patter of raindrops! So joyful a heavenly dance! Blessings dear friend for a wonderful Thanksgiving!
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Date: 11/15/2022 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2022 6:12:00 AM
Eve, I love your sweet poem and quote. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.
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Date: 11/13/2022 7:55:00 AM
Back with congratulations!
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Date: 11/4/2022 10:39:00 AM
- A happy dance in the rain ... best wishes in the contest, Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 11/4/2022 7:43:00 AM
GREAT entry using the word umbrella!!
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Date: 11/4/2022 2:42:00 AM
Lovely poem. I am not sure I understood the rules, but you wrote a lovely poem.
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Date: 11/4/2022 1:42:00 AM
Wonderful, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/3/2022 7:02:00 PM
Beautiful! Take us with you
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