Laura Leiser Poet Pleiades

Umbrella

Under a nylon dome
         upside, raindrops patter
                   upon my small enclave
                           unusual patterns 
                   unique, sliding over
          ubiquitous water
 upends the stormy skies.















A Pleiades Poem
10/1/2022

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Hat Bueckert March 20, 2023 at 8:26 PM Reading some of your alphabet Pleiades, a fun series you did, this one really stood out to me. Great wording :) Laura Leiser March 20, 2023 at 9:36 PM Thank you, Hat! I enjoyed working with the Pleiades form. Glad you liked this one! :)

Kim Rodrigues October 3, 2022 at 11:49 AM Unusual patterns sliding over ubiquitous water…love the wording in your verse. It was interesting! Laura Leiser October 3, 2022 at 11:56 AM Thank you, Kim! I’m glad you liked this one! :)

Jim Tomcatx October 1, 2022 at 10:26 AM Well-done. Very good writing & I like the structure/formatting (sort of a shape poem). Laura Leiser October 1, 2022 at 11:00 AM Thank you, Nj! I appreciate your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed this! :)