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Sprawl on a strong limb invisible to the sunlight dim Feasting in the summer‘s greens and sounds of fish swim Pond hums hymns with those that gaze and linger Across the pond time swiftly hinders Umber world gradient chatters while I slumber Cumber from feeding as I saw lumber I yawn as the dawn soft air blooms beyond Musk from the bottom of the mucky pond Down from my loft with hunger In the mood for food I wander 4/13/2016

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/15/2016 8:48:00 AM

I like how you expressed this piece, well done.

Constance La France

Date: 4/14/2016 2:52:00 PM

Eve, I love this soft and dreamy write, oh to be able to just have a snooze anywhere, like up in a tree, 7 ~

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/14/2016 6:54:00 AM

Great write and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.