Umama

She who gave birth to me She gave birth to a warriour Though I rip through the streets with no direction You still manage to give me attention What did I ever do to be deservant of your love In my daily life I always make a choice to raise my voice Ngiyabonga Mama Ngiyabonga Imbokodo Jy is die bes O mosadi tia All glory you deserve You're a mother with a positive attitude And you deserve my gratitude! UMama

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Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 3:08:00 AM

Tolamo Mokhoenyana, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ke Nna Tolamo
Date: 3/27/2016 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much.I'm even glowing from the lovely remarks I have received.You're amazing.You've managed to change my vision of my future and the kind of career I should do.I will also support you like you have supported me.Take care,God bless

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2016 6:15:00 PM

Tolamo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ke Nna Tolamo
Date: 3/25/2016 6:34:00 AM

Thank you so much!This is beyond my expectations.Your support means a lot to me.I am looking forward to reading your poems and also those of other poets.This does seem like a good environment.I know for sure that I will have a great time.Thank you Linda?