Ultra Violent Light


Dark grey matter
manifest crimson flow tendacies
Fade to black thoughts 
formaldehyde revealed thru scope sight
Scarlet droplets trace a fetal prone outline;
such a morbid delivery ... 
a yellow tape, premature plight

Coffin borne mutilated bodies 
with bullet death birthmarks:
Revolver uttered first cries of last rites
A morgue spectrum of short wave anger — 
Trigger hatred
blinded by ultra violent light

Living in crypt darkness,
metal barrel skin worms catacomb move  
with cadaver quickness
towards the UV light
Leaving iron-copper tracks of desecration,
as a spectral flatline 
guides their hooked pellet mind

Cherry bomb pulmonary flashes 
of ultra violent light
show the infra red, spherical graveyard
shining deathly bright
Sadly visible 
from the firmament height

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/21/2019 2:09:00 PM
This is really dark... and there is always a metaphor in your poem... that last stanza is full of flashing lights my friend... i worry for epileptic readers..
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Date: 11/21/2019 12:58:00 PM
You are a magnificent writer.. The images here, truly powerful, dark and have a life of their own! Thank you Panagiota
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Date: 11/21/2019 10:57:00 AM
An intense poem only you know how to write like this Freddie. Well done :)
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