Ultra Naive

Let fingers whisper passion in clashes,
Stroke fire and heat to enrage the flashes,
Each seductive contact with the caches,
As I torture your skin with tongue lashes.

Hyperactive silhouette's of contenders,
Loving probes matching their surrenders,
Wiggling members entertained by plunders,
Feverish minds management blunders?

Secret desires in rhymed wet modes,
Covets thirsty pleasure dripping lodes:
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 4:36 PM
I enjoyed reading you poetry today Jai. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Burton Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:57 AM
Great rym... and loved the end, enjoy your night.:)
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