Notes About The Poem
Wrote this some years ago to express my fear.

Ultimate Nightmare

In total darkness
My helpless naked body 
Like a mere rag doll
Is tossed precariously
Into the cursing unforgiving
freezing sea
My body in shock
I am petrified filled with fear
And find it hard to breath.

My limbs tossed and thrown about
At the mercy of the towering cursing waves
That has taken so many unmercifully
To the murky depths
And a watery grave.

The freezing cold cuts and bites my tender skin
And as I swirl around against my will
My head is in a spin
I'm getting tired and more tired
As the waves crash and get increasingly higher
Drifting in and out of consciousness
Never knowing what will happen next
And when I will expire.

I just want to sleep
I hope I will soon die
I give out primal screams
But  there's no one to hear my cries.

The sheer noise of the thunderous waves
Deafens me and hurts my ears
I become delusional
Calling out for mother
And cry so many tears.

I sense the sharks are gathering
To frenziedly rip and tear my flesh
And drag me down into those dark, freezing  murky depths.

My bones to lay on the ocean bed
And soon to be covered by silt and sand
Soon to be forgotten
As though I'd never existed as a person
Or a man
At peace at last.



Peter Dome copyright.2014.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Nicely done Peter
Dome Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 3:35 AM
Thank you Skat, glad you liked it.hope you're ok. my best wishes. take care. Pete.
Deschler Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 7:26 PM
The dark images and wording really expressed that fear of being lost, dying and never being found... Great writing, Peter! Congrats on the win!
Dome Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 4:18 AM
Hi Kelly. what a great surprise, I had no idea. thank you for telling me and kindly stopping by. take good care. my best wishes. Pete.
Flannery Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Wow what a powerful and excellently written poem Peter. Perfectly written. Great job!
Dome Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 4:50 PM
Thank you so much Vincen. I really appreciate your kind words. glad you enjoyed it. Take good care. Best wishes. Pete.
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