Ultimate Goal

               The fervent, abiding sun
                   mirrors the gallant, coarse grass.
                 An alluring, charming tree
                   is threaded with a fine thread
                       of a stork.
                  Living in the moonless night
                  an unflinching spell of life
                      and caressing it, it will be
                            absolutely ecstatic.
                   An ardent spring of a glowing,
                      luminous  lamb
                         dresses a triumphal tomorrow.
                    A grievous , weeping  nightingale
                            fades in a deluge,
                              dense knoll.
                        The violet, crimson goal
                            stays in a passionate,
                               light mound.
                           Joyous, stoneless  days
                              gleam unquestionably. 
                         A bluebird unfurling its wings
                                like petals may cross 
                             the blissful , tidal creek.    
                            A valiant  swallow  never 
                           succumbs to a permanent fire.\
                             An unfettered, unbounded
                               chrysanthemum grins
                                       with bliss.
                              The phoenix blossoms like                              .
                          an enchanted rivulet.
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Chaudhury Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 9:38 AM
Oh words shall bring in more To say : Encore, Encore!
mysore Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 8:02 PM
so peaceful picture, lovely write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Magdalinos Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:13 AM
Thank you, dear poet. Have a blessed weekend.
Agustin Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Magdalinos Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Thank you Beata, Have a blessed week!
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 12:42 PM
beautiful imagery. Soupie for you.
Magdalinos Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Hello Andrea, thank you my dear Andrea. Have a blessed evening!
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