ULTIMATE FOLLY

A girl from the Folies Bergere
Manoeuvred her feathers with care.
One night, to a gasp,
They slipped from her grasp
And there she stood totally bare
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Bartley Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 2:27 PM
I like this one. #1 to me. Thanks for sharing. Dumpster fire!
Miller Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Very cute and well penned, congratulations
mysore Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 8:01 PM
sue the bird! congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Canerdy Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:24 PM
Gotta be super careful with those feathery covers. LOL! CONGRATS on your win, Bryn. Janice
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