Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Ukraine-Unraveled By Dirty Cats

the sugar-coated jasmine sigh
breeds jealousy - bellicose-blue sky.

sunflowers vastly disappear in ash -
the yellow beauties pure joy
immortalize in dearth.

Brutes, take your hands off the yellow-blue flag!
Townsfolk stand tall with vultures' dissection.
They hide their pride in each cranny and crag.
Beasts never share in Ukraine's affection.

blue and yellow twine
unraveled by dirty cats -
shadows in darkness

4/12/2022
A combination of forms:
Crystalline- Kimo- Quatrain- Haiku
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
HowManySyllables & Rhymezone used

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James Horn April 13, 2022 at 10:30 AM had been a big blitz so we would be blown to bits also lose our wits Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2022 at 11:23 AM It’s awful :( James Horn April 13, 2022 at 10:31 AM while we lose our wits

Victor Buhagiar April 13, 2022 at 1:25 AM Let the Ukraine flag stand high. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2022 at 4:13 AM Right! ~ hugs

Caren Krutsinger April 12, 2022 at 10:31 PM " Brutes, take your hands off the yellow-blue flag!" I wish they would! Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2022 at 4:12 AM I know! ~ hugs

Sara Kendrick April 12, 2022 at 2:51 PM Good political work for the contest. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. I feel so for the people of Ukraine. Thanks for the visit to my page. Your visits always inspire. Sara Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2022 at 3:04 PM This was my second attempt for this contest..not easy. Thank you, Sara!

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 12, 2022 at 1:56 PM The world is in a sad state, with so much war and aggression. Your poem is eloquent, outstanding and beautifully expressed, Kim. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2022 at 3:05 PM Thank you, Evelyn! Very sorry state…

Joseph P. DiMino April 12, 2022 at 1:21 PM The horrors of war personified! Excellent, emotive writing, Kim; best of luck in contest. Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2022 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Joe!

Eve Roper April 12, 2022 at 12:54 PM enjoyed reading, good luck, Kim. Blessings Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2022 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Eve!