Uh Oh Something Is Amiss

There is yelling and crying
Good.
There is screaming. 
A loud wail. Great!

Uh-oh.
Dead quiet.
I creep up, quietly
To spy on them

Knowing something is
Up. They are four, six, 
And eight, 

Only quiet when they
Are up to their most
Dastardly deeds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/8/2019 7:35:00 PM
Love & FAV this!!! So perfectly summed up... ;D
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 3/9/2019 1:29:00 AM
I know... I've missed you (and being here), too!!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2019 9:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend. GLAD to see you! I have missed you so!
Date: 3/8/2019 10:56:00 AM
Caren, I read your comment to victor. I believe in that motherly radar. LOL
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2019 4:49:00 PM
And the fatherly radar too if you are lucky enough to have them for the day, right Charles?
Date: 3/8/2019 10:52:00 AM
Ya gotta be a kid, when you're that age. Good one.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2019 4:50:00 PM
One time I heard screaming and yelling above my head. I was talking to my daughter at the time. She stopped in the middle of the sentence and yelled "Don't make me come up there!" There was dead silence. We high-fived each other. I was so proud; she is the kind of mother I planned to raise. Neither of us took a step toward them.
Date: 3/8/2019 12:10:00 AM
more ahead; I've come, sometimes I feel something is missing; o the world, on your boat I miss something subconsciously.........
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2019 5:13:00 AM
I doubt you miss much, actually, Mahtab.
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