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Ugly Poem

Broken glass world pithed with black flags madmen and misfits. Where is our god in all this fantastic muck? Atop an out of touch mountain top... Salving wounds of savant sons? Far below all the rest flayed and salted. mostly forgotten Our collective-depressive monkey minds fleeing to origami boats. Drifting upon shark finned ponds. Flaming arrows line the shores. Ribbed strays and one-legged orphans turning tricks for milk and crumbs and the rustic prosthetic called love.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/28/2014 3:49:00 AM

Someone cut deep!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2014 7:49:00 AM

I almost forgot, I came to thank you for picking my poem. I am greatly honored by your placement.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2014 7:46:00 AM

Disturbing and yet eloquent write. God bound his own hands when he gave us free will. He also allows our hands to be the instrument of his healing but first we must give ourselves over to his heart. Pain is as inevitable as breathing, as a believer the difference is that I no longer face it alone. I now can pull back the curtain and see beyond the temporary.

John Lawless

Date: 9/12/2014 10:09:00 PM

Well, Anthony, I shall have to revisit this poem several more times to allow its multiple levels of meaning to percolate to the surface. I am partial to the line "our monkey minds fleeing on origami boats"