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unrhymed tercets i say it how my soul sees it in twelve lines 

Provide terminations to everyone that has a choice some choose not to kill and stay involved in saving human life rather than devalue An unborn child to begin with in the womb of all places a mother holds keys where value is held by some within this role During fasting on bread and water a bit of butter became the treat how little worth has a poor human soul When so much value is put on the butter nothing can cover up the truth before judgement day alive is the spirit that sees through the lies

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Date: 11/9/2018 11:35:00 AM
You make your case boldly in this excellent poem. I feel your devotion to your cause..in your forceful words. Very well written poem, Liam.
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Date: 11/9/2018 8:36:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! Very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.So heartfelt!All Satan's puppets!A very corrupted World!It will get worse!Breaks my heart to see all ugly,sad, evil acts done against God, ppl n' all! All signs of end of days, according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need pray to God now more than ever for lost souls to accept Jesus.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Please, take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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