U Suk

of all the things I have survived
never would have guessed that I'd be held hostage 
by a self-righteous, lazy, sniveling pile of misery as you
there is a reason that I don't allow people like you 
into the world that I DO have control over  
you suk
the very life out of everyone that gets in your path
what makes you wanna fight?
how is it working for you?
i'll be your punching bag, W H A T E V E R 
plez just hold your lil family as the treasure of treasures
i do have to thank you girl
for forcing me to be the grown up here
while watching you wallow in your own vile
Oh! Hey hear the one about the vegan, tree hugger, peace -n- love type 
filled with poison and hate?
ya, me neither
you suk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Nice passionate creative verses, kristi
Dailey Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Very passionate but I never did understand how free verse was poetry. I have to have some rhythm and rhyme. I would love to see you put the same thoughts and passion into rhythm and rhyme as a challenge.
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