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U R Not Your Gun

You are: The sound of your mother's voice calling your name and your father's chance for a better life--not his, but yours, because it's too late for him, but not for you...not yet, unless you forget U R Not Your Gun. You are your greatest fantasy and someone's best friend and another's first love. You are shelter from the storm. You are memory and risk and reward. You are tougher than your disappointments, you are kinder than you imagine, you are everything that child you once were wanted to be and more. But U R Not Your Gun-- not grey and cold and lifeless. Not unforgiving like that. Not hollow or predictable. Not dangerous. U R Not Your Gun. You are someone I can love. Evelyn Augusto for GUNS DON'T SAVE PEOPLE POETS DO. Oct. 4th, 2019

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Date: 3/29/2018 8:46:00 PM
Great timing & oh; so true. People can be anything they wish, objects don't define us. Well done.
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Date: 3/29/2018 3:51:00 AM
Good luck in the contest; a great reminder. This poem is a winner in so many psychologically well understandable ways, Evelyn.
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Date: 3/27/2018 1:19:00 AM
U r not your gun! Thankyou for sharing this piece. H
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Date: 3/25/2018 2:08:00 PM
Another incredible pen on that too hot a topic. I'm a Canuck myself, boggled by the romancing of the gun; your Poet's eye view is refreshing. I can't imagine it's an easy topic in your home. I'm loving your poetry, will be looking to read more. Welcome to Poetry Soup! xomo :)
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