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Ole Tyree was a tourist from Texas who went to a rock and roll nexus. He yo-del-io-ed in Sun Stu-d-io that's how he got kicked out of Memphis. 11-14-14

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2014 11:36:00 PM

Sent you soupmail Debbie, sorry forgot to say this was me, nikko ;p

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/3/2014 11:17:00 AM

Tyree is in great problem.I know Tyree very well. He lives near my house. He is retired and re- retired and expecting his third retirement.he is ubiquitous omnipresent.Love Debbiexxxrajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2014 8:26:00 PM

I really like yours and once in a while, limericks are made better by NOT rhyming. that is why that one line is so great, It makes the joke of the last line. If it is in the contest, I hope roy will accept its non rhyme in that one spot as part of its humor.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/22/2014 10:04:00 PM

well, the rhyming dictionary says Memphis, texas, & neus rhymes hon- I don't think he will like my poetic license in yo-del-io-ed/ or stu-d-io either basically it has no chance at all BUT it's an entry, I participated & I like it

Paul Callus

Date: 11/17/2014 5:15:00 PM

Oh this must be for the contest!!! If you don't enter it I'll give you the boot!! Very witty and original. :))) // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2014 4:21:00 PM

You have me giggling, Deb. I'll be sure not to yo-del-lo if I go to Memphis :D. Old Tyree's picture looks a lot like Willie Nelson. Love this limerick, dear, and wish you success in the contest! Love, carolyn

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/15/2014 10:01:00 AM

This is long overdue... my apology! Realized I'm missing what makes this site as great as it is... sorry! GREAT limerick, Debbie! Huggsies XXX

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/15/2014 12:24:00 AM

Haha..heloooo hooo hoo-A great limerick sweet ma.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2014 6:43:00 PM

Even the photo made me smile. I enjoyed your Limerick Debbie.

David Meade

Date: 11/14/2014 4:43:00 PM

Being from Texas, I can relate . . . we just don't fit in sometimes (currently in DC visiting my daughter -- it's different here!) . . . made me laugh. All the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/14/2014 4:17:00 PM

made me smile thanks Debbie:-) Hugs jan x