Typhoon

Mighty nature’s force mixing things around Battering places in agitation Landslides and flashfloods surge high from the ground Causing damages, large devastation High casualty rate --- worst destruction Climate change creates more occurrences Of this monstrous ghost leaving crises But midst the strongest wind and heavy rain Prayer saves us... typhoon’s strength decreases So, save mother earth to draw storms in vain. Nov. 1,2022 16.13pm Theme: Nature (Storm) Dizain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet howmanysyllable.com 61 words 100 syllables (10 syllables each line) 437 characters Dizain Poetry Contest Contest Judged: 11/5/2022 8:02:00 AM Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Place: 2 ( up to 4 multi-w)

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/6/2022 5:12:00 AM

Rebellious nature beautifully captured. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/7/2022 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comment and your congratulatory greetings my dear friend Christuraj. Blessings. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2022 3:52:00 AM

I am glad you were saved to tell the story in poetic form. Way to go. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 11/7/2022 11:14:00 PM

God is merciful my dear friend Sara. Thanks a lot for reading my poem and for your congratulatory greetings. Blessings to you. Hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/5/2022 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Len. You have composed such an excellent poem.

Len Gasun
Date: 11/5/2022 6:46:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much for appreciating and acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Sotto. I never expected it. Thank you so much especially for your encouraging comment. It means a lot to me. God bless you always. Hugs