Tyler's Song

When I hear it,
it makes me wanna cry.
Following along,
makes me wanna die.
He sings it to me all the time.
Can we make this love
something more than a crime?
It hurts to think of
him night and day
and somehow, 
he makes the pain go away.
Missing the sound of his voice,
yet I can still hear it above
the noise.
His love drives me insane,
but his eyes
are worth the pain.
I wish he could really see
the true love that is
within me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Smith Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Cry!! this is dramatic, but thats romance for you.
Parish Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 9:50 AM
Beautifully written filled with emotion.
Whitley Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 2:50 PM
Wow....You're really really talented...and you're only 14? You go girl! ~Oreo
Martin Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 9:19 AM
Congrats on your feature, and I like your title..Tyler
Heck Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 10:02 AM
Serenity - Congratulations on your feature this week! Wishing you a Happy & Healthy New Year. Peace always, John
Mason Avatar
December 24, 2008 at 3:41 PM
Beautiful love write here, Serenity and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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December 23, 2008 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations Serenity on the featuring of "Tyler's Song." Vince
Moreno Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 8:57 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
Washington Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:48 PM
Really nice song, congrats on being featured this week.
Washington Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:47 PM
Really nice song, congrats on being featured this week.
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December 22, 2008 at 3:25 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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December 22, 2008 at 8:28 AM
Serenity, your words of choice drip with emotion as they reach out to touch your readers in your own special kind of way as I applaud you for a job well done. Congratulations for being featured here as I close by saying may your holiday be safe and filled with happiness. Wonderful Poem... MPK
Jordan Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 12:23 AM
Serenity - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
Winter Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
Matheny Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 9:24 AM
I Love This Poem SOOOO Much!!!! I think cause it reminds me of my Best Friend Tyler Bourne. . Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^
Anderson Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 10:25 AM
I like this one the best too ;o)
Montgomery Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 9:27 AM
oops.. on that last comment I meant to put relationship lol...
Montgomery Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 9:26 AM
This is basically my favorite poem of mine just because it's really special to me. :) It's about tyler, the guy I've loved for 3 years. Sadly, as of right now, we are broken up. But hey, it's hard to keep a good relaionship when you're only 14!! lol....
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