Two Worlds Colliding

Major breakdown
an emergency call
rushing to the plant

on my table
under the candle
an unfinished poem


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By:kash poet

Contest:Two Worlds Colliding

Sponsor:Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 2:33 PM
Great topic...Most can relate to this one in some way or another..((()))!!Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Kash. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 11:42 PM
KASH, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD
Tsiluma Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 1:11 AM
Love this Kash. Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 7:45 PM
yes, I remember really liking this one. Belated congrats, kash.
Gorelick Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Wow, I like! a tardy congrats. BG
Guzzi Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 6:29 PM
ah yes sanity? and insanity? health & illness? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Williams Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 2:31 AM
Kash, congrats on your great win...I can see it now...David
Arowolo Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Wow!This is awesome.Great write, Kash. Congratulations on your superb win...
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Great contrast, Kash. I like it. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Richards Avatar
August 10, 2012 at 4:19 PM
Love it!! Perfect contrast!
Onclaud Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 5:55 AM
a celestial smash this is , kashi bud... the floods have subsided but we are not that safe yet... hope all's well with you... this piece will hit the headlines!..wow!..:) huggs!
Williams Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 1:05 AM
Kash, just excellent ....David
Stevens Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Kash, I really like this poem, your are a wonderful writer...thank you for sharing with the world!!
A   Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 9:44 PM
Kash, find the thought epic. one can only hold so much before giving up... good luck in the contest..pd
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 9:07 PM
GOOD one, describing the poet's dilemma, trying to write poems despite all the many things he has to attend to. I love where you took the theme. Just posted a poem, there is no way I am staying long tonight!! haha. I did two hours in the afternoon and now I have so much to catch up on in my house. Anyway, I saw your poem posted right under mine. How cool!!
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