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Two Worlds Colliding

Water is flowing This is a world in liquid. without shape or form. Here’s the solid earth When it mixes with water it only makes mud. Robert Pettit For Russell Sivey’s “Two Worlds Colliding” contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 2:38:00 PM

((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:40:00 PM

ROBERT.., a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 7:42:00 PM

I love how you did yours on mud. unique and interesting. congrats on your win, Robert.

Glenn Sentes

Date: 8/13/2012 9:07:00 PM

simply thought-provoking! =)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:22:00 PM

Thoughtful write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:29:00 AM

Robert congrats on your great win....David

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:30:00 AM

Nicely done, Robert! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/4/2012 11:08:00 AM

Nice collaboration of earth and water makes mud. Wish you the best in the contest. Loved always, bl

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/4/2012 3:51:00 AM

Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry