Robert Pettit Poet Haiku

Two Worlds Colliding

Water is flowing
This is a world in liquid.
without shape or form.

Here’s the solid earth
When it mixes with water
it only makes mud.

Robert Pettit
For Russell Sivey’s “Two Worlds Colliding” contest

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Sara Kendrick August 18, 2012 at 2:38 PM ((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2012 at 5:51 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 11:40 PM ROBERT.., a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2012 at 7:42 PM I love how you did yours on mud. unique and interesting. congrats on your win, Robert.

Glenn Sentes August 13, 2012 at 9:07 PM simply thought-provoking! =)

Debbie Guzzi August 12, 2012 at 6:22 PM Thoughtful write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams August 12, 2012 at 2:29 AM Robert congrats on your great win....David

Kim Merryman August 11, 2012 at 11:30 AM Nicely done, Robert! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Bl Devnath August 4, 2012 at 11:08 AM Nice collaboration of earth and water makes mud. Wish you the best in the contest. Loved always, bl

Terry O'Leary August 4, 2012 at 3:51 AM Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry