Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Two Worlds Colliding

You sat on one cloud...
                                           I sat on a another one...
                                            Clouds collide up high...

                                            Sharing the same sky...
                                     Thunder and lighting from love...
                                                A sunset to sleep...






                                               by Michael J Falotco
                                            "Two Worlds Colliding"
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Sara Kendrick August 16, 2012 at 4:15 PM Ahh! Romantic..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2012 at 5:48 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 11:39 PM HI MICHAEL , a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2012 at 7:39 PM I remember how I loved this the first time. big congrats on your win, Michael.

Barbara Gorelick August 13, 2012 at 7:24 AM Nice! a tardy congrats Michael...BG

Debbie Guzzi August 12, 2012 at 6:18 PM Imaginative write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams August 12, 2012 at 2:25 AM Michael congrats on your great win....David

Joann Grisetti August 11, 2012 at 4:31 PM Congratulations on your outstanding poem.

Kim Merryman August 11, 2012 at 11:19 AM Beautiful imagery, Michael! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Wilma Neels August 1, 2012 at 11:41 AM MJF, this one has got a dreamy feel to it :) love it! love & hugs CTH

Black Eyed Susan August 1, 2012 at 7:12 AM I agree with andrea. the clouds colliding is very creative. good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2012 at 8:33 PM I LOVE this one. wow, you took it to a heavenly realm. Truly imaginative.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 31, 2012 at 8:05 AM excellent Michael luv.. this says it all ..how luv is fashioned .. best wishes and I share your sentiments with the comment u left me on y Colliding entry.. wow what a collision we would make ..oh JG in thoughtful mode.. dangerous.. xoxo

David Williams July 30, 2012 at 5:59 AM Michael a love one, I like it my friend, best of luck, have a great week as well...David