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Two Worlds Collding

Africa, lie low, amidst the jungle beauty and many oceans. Stanley meets Zulu the center cracks open then all things fall apart for Russell Sivey's Two Worlds Colliding Contest 7th August, '12 Modupe Sefunmi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/18/2012 1:59:00 PM
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Great work that you have written..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/16/2012 6:12:00 AM
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Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Modupe. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2012 11:47:00 PM
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MODUPE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/14/2012 8:02:00 PM
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I remember this one well. Belated congratulations on your win.
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David Williams
Date: 8/12/2012 2:42:00 AM
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Modupe congrats on your great win....David
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 8/11/2012 7:59:00 PM
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One of the best in the whole group. Great job. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 8/11/2012 5:30:00 PM
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Congrats on your superb win.great job..kudos to you...xx
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Matthew Anish
Date: 8/11/2012 5:11:00 PM
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This poem reminds me of the title of the African novel "Things fall Apart" by Achebe. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2012 9:08:00 PM
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I think you changed the names in the second one? I think that improved it for me, making it more like "east meets west" Yes, it is improved now!!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2012 2:46:00 PM
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I've clicked on four of your poems and I can't find the poem you wanted me to see if it was improved. You'll have to remind me of its title.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/7/2012 8:54:00 PM
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Yes, follow Olusegun's advice below my comment. The first one if my favorite. It's quite nice!
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 8/7/2012 2:57:00 PM
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Modupe,pls adjust the haiku to follow the 5-7-5 syllable arrangement.esp the second one.stay blessed.
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