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Two Worlds Collding

Africa, lie low,
             amidst the jungle beauty
                and many oceans.


                  Stanley meets Zulu
            the center cracks open then
                  all things fall apart



       for Russell Sivey's Two Worlds Colliding Contest





7th August, '12
Modupe Sefunmi

Copyright © Modupe Sefunmi | Year Posted 2012

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2012 1:59:00 PM Great work that you have written..Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2012 6:12:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Modupe. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2012 11:47:00 PM MODUPE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/14/2012 8:02:00 PM I remember this one well. Belated congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/12/2012 2:42:00 AM Modupe congrats on your great win....David Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/11/2012 7:59:00 PM One of the best in the whole group. Great job. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 8/11/2012 5:30:00 PM Congrats on your superb win.great job..kudos to you...xx Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 8/11/2012 5:11:00 PM This poem reminds me of the title of the African novel "Things fall Apart" by Achebe. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2012 9:08:00 PM I think you changed the names in the second one? I think that improved it for me, making it more like "east meets west" Yes, it is improved now!!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2012 2:46:00 PM I've clicked on four of your poems and I can't find the poem you wanted me to see if it was improved. You'll have to remind me of its title. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/7/2012 8:54:00 PM Yes, follow Olusegun's advice below my comment. The first one if my favorite. It's quite nice! Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 8/7/2012 2:57:00 PM Modupe,pls adjust the haiku to follow the 5-7-5 syllable arrangement.esp the second one.stay blessed. Login to Reply