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I close my eyes and look back, always back... to a time, a place, to you... I wonder about you, often I wonder, always you... I loved you dearly, only you... love parted, no one's fault, just parted... I longed for you daily, each hour... I looked for you nightly, every night... I called out for you, strongly, loudly... I never heard an answer, never, ever... I'll never forget you, I'm certain... I only have these words, I'm sorry... forever sorry. For "Close you eyes and kick your heels" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. By: George Aul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/6/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement George. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win!
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:11:00 AM
Poignant feeling of regret. Congrats, George. :)
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:59:00 AM
hey George congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:08:00 AM
A Tenth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 12:27:00 AM
Very expressive. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:38:00 PM
10th place win!!!!~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~smile for the grand placement my friend poet~~~*-*jun-jun
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Date: 9/2/2011 8:09:00 PM
George--I want to congratulate u for a heart-stirring write! The regret is so well articulated...the raw heart wound still gushing... Gwendolen
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:32:00 PM
I have these words in almost every thing I write in some way.... wonderful piece and thank you for the support....Michael
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:16:00 PM
Congrats George on a spectacular win for this wonderful write my friend.. adoring words filled with deep emotion luv..
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