Notes About The Poem
Thought I'd give this form a go! I followed the rules, structure, but missed the mark on clever or witty. I'll keep trying! ;) xoxo Than-Bauks: 3 lines, 4 syllables each line, with the rhyme on the first line, fourth syllable, 2nd line, third syllable, 3rd line, second syllable.

Two Than-Bauks:


Flea Market Find

What can this be
Let us see if
This key will work


Daily Grace

God is the light
In His might He
Turns night to day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 5:40 PM
This is not an easy form, I think I tried it a couple times, Nicely done
Woods Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 9:11 AM
Tysm! I really want to try for the clever or witty aspect common with this form. I'll have to check yours out! Xo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Very nice! Love both of them! Well done.
Woods Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Ty Kim! What a pleasure to hear from you today! Xo
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