Two Straight Madelines

curlicues perhaps
the Catholic nun
wouldn’t let me engage
in penmanship shape
“shape up, sit straight!!”
yet the ancients
would whirligig
with their featherings
fill up the page
with their zorro-like signature
tap-tap-tap
the teacher’s brought me back
to life, to engage
in this ((yawn)) bor…ing
admonish the swording
don’t let me squander her time
keep in step with the four wall attack
windows of daydreams grow black
march march march
in two straight Madeline-s
the feather tickles my digits
my mind metamorphic 
the rhymes fantastic
tap-tap-tap
this time near my ear
the fearsome whip
that steers me
into correction
dear nun’s satisfaction
i’ll get an A
in penmanship
but conduct -
can’t shut me up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buhagiar Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 1:07 AM
I wonder if by Madeline you mean a French cake. Or perhaps I'm missing something. With all this pain, my mind is not working properly,
Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 2:04 AM
There is a children’s book called Madeline where the children follow their teacher in two straight lines…so a play on words. There teacher is a nun. It is a classic!
Romios Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Get the news on, you know why. Pangie. The future of the United States. 5:42 PST Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 6:36 PM
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