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TWO STARS IN A CHILD'S FUTURE

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TWO STARS IN A CHILD'S FUTURE

Choosing a faithful woman to fulfill this fate
to bring forth a baby with a loud scream;
sweet cry so innocent piercing air and soul,
touch him tenderly: he is the fruit of our seed!
May his faith shed light on doubt and darkness...
let's hope that his deeds and words will be fine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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