Wm Paul Poet Free verse

Two Stars

A star in the sky is hard to reach,
But I have a star I can touch.
The sky star is far away,
Mine is close.
They both shine.
The sky star shines bright, but cold,
My star shines bright and warm.
They eyes of my star twinkle,
My star is alive and human.
The star in the sky sets a goal,
A goal found, but never reached.
My stars not my goal,
But a force behind me to reach it.

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Poet Destroyer A June 4, 2012 at 3:27 PM Hi,Wm i think you did a awesome job in writing this poem.Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA! Wm Paul June 24, 2012 at 11:12 AM Dear Sylvia, Thanks for the comment. This one was really one of the first poems I wrote that was not and assignment in school, and it started me to write poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2012 at 4:50 AM Love it, very well written Wm. - oxox Anne-Lise Wm Paul June 24, 2012 at 11:13 AM Thanks for the comment. This one was really one of the first poems I wrote that was not and assignment in school, and it started me to write poetry.