Two Souls Piercing the Night

On the wings of mercury        She slips into my soul        Using kind words and 
memories       To mend this gaping hole        Surrounded by unseeing walls        
Never touching no embrace        Thunderbolts breaking boundaries        Closing 
this unsurmountable unspoken space        Days fall into months         Time 
crashes to the floor        Eyes searching outward        Crying out for more        
This mystery of wonder        Two souls piercing the night       Silent whispers of 
tomorrow      Their union will make it right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 12:24 PM
This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..
Ferry Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 12:19 AM
Funom Have not checked out Poetry Soup in a long time....Thanks for all your praise rick
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:03 AM
Nice one, congrats Richard ...huggs
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 7:46 PM
Such brilliant imagery the poem flows so so well - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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January 1, 2015 at 6:57 PM
RICHARD, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
A   Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 11:31 PM
Hi Richard, a wonderful, flowing feeling arousing the moment. Silent whispers, keeping it together... Always... Linda
Ferry Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 11:59 PM
thanks my friend....nice to hear from you....rick
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 6:25 PM
such longing in this poem, Richard!! I love that imagery of the line: time crashes to the floor!! It's really good to see you posting up a new poem finally!
Ferry Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 10:40 PM
hopefully back for awhile
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