Two Souls Piercing the Night

On the wings of mercury        She slips into my soul        Using kind words and 
memories       To mend this gaping hole        Surrounded by unseeing walls        
Never touching no embrace        Thunderbolts breaking boundaries        Closing 
this unsurmountable unspoken space        Days fall into months         Time 
crashes to the floor        Eyes searching outward        Crying out for more        
This mystery of wonder        Two souls piercing the night       Silent whispers of 
tomorrow      Their union will make it right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/26/2015 12:24:00 PM
This is a well thought piece, showcasing the tender make up of your soul and the immense creativity, so rich in your mind. I so love this and thanks a lot for sharing..
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Richard Ferry
Date: 3/17/2017 12:19:00 AM
Funom Have not checked out Poetry Soup in a long time....Thanks for all your praise rick
Date: 1/2/2015 4:03:00 AM
Nice one, congrats Richard ...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:46:00 PM
Such brilliant imagery the poem flows so so well - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2015 6:57:00 PM
RICHARD, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
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Date: 3/31/2014 11:31:00 PM
Hi Richard, a wonderful, flowing feeling arousing the moment. Silent whispers, keeping it together... Always... Linda
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Richard Ferry
Date: 3/31/2014 11:59:00 PM
thanks my friend....nice to hear from you....rick
Date: 3/31/2014 6:25:00 PM
such longing in this poem, Richard!! I love that imagery of the line: time crashes to the floor!! It's really good to see you posting up a new poem finally!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 3/31/2014 10:40:00 PM
hopefully back for awhile
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