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Two Silly Seals




              Two Silly Seals Limeridk
                       8/26/2023



Two silly seals were whooping it up.
Scarfing down,booze,cold ales and stuff.
Things got so dicey,
She,in the sea, icey.
His tears fall for her on moonlit nights.
He wants her back,to make things so right!



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Lindley Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 4:10 AM
My friend that sure look like a fun new form. God bless you my friend. Your poetry always speak both heart and truth. True poets have that , others do not. A gam and a fav. God bless you.
Romios Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 4:39 PM
9/4 I must have macaroni for brains! Missed your comment.! Apologies, Celebrating Grandsons 17th birthday today,))) Glad you enjoyed. And faved. Panagiota xx You are right about me, Truth and fears, No matter if people agree with me or not. I would prefer death than being a follower, gracias.Pangie Gracia, Pangie
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:40 PM
I think these two should 'seal it with a kiss!' ~ Brian Hyland
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:56 PM
Smooches )) Pangie
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 2:10 PM
A creative/fun Limerick write/picture. A fun read. Thanks for the laugh. I think it is 5 lines... Have a blessed/great day.............
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Thanks fir the reminder, Am changing it ti Rhyme and correcting the title. My reminder for you…is ! to use soup-mail for corrections Poets are sensitive souls. Pangie With deep appreciation))
Eagle Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Very well done. A joy to read today. You are so creative.
Romios Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Glad you and David have enjoyed this, I really loved writing this. Thank you Elena, for your support! Pangie
Fisher Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 6:26 PM
And silly as a good limerick should be, Pangie. He's got to seal the deal!
Romios Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 7:56 PM
You are a riot David “Seal the deal”.LOL! I am just learning this form. They seem simple in structure. I much prefer being on. stage than writing humor. Even though it was a terrifying……. Performing is far more fun.!!!!! That photo has much humor in it. for me. It launched the poem! Pangie thank you, mich
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