Two Silly Seals

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Two Silly Seals Limeridk 8/26/2023 Two silly seals were whooping it up. Scarfing down,booze,cold ales and stuff. Things got so dicey, She,in the sea, icey. His tears fall for her on moonlit nights. He wants her back,to make things so right!

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/30/2023 4:10:00 AM

My friend that sure look like a fun new form. God bless you my friend. Your poetry always speak both heart and truth. True poets have that , others do not. A gam and a fav. God bless you.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/4/2023 4:39:00 PM

9/4 I must have macaroni for brains! Missed your comment.! Apologies, Celebrating Grandsons 17th birthday today,))) Glad you enjoyed. And faved. Panagiota xx You are right about me, Truth and fears, No matter if people agree with me or not. I would prefer death than being a follower, gracias.Pangie Gracia, Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2023 7:40:00 PM

I think these two should 'seal it with a kiss!' ~ Brian Hyland

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2023 7:56:00 PM

Smooches )) Pangie

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2023 2:10:00 PM

A creative/fun Limerick write/picture. A fun read. Thanks for the laugh. I think it is 5 lines... Have a blessed/great day.............

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2023 3:38:00 PM

Thanks fir the reminder, Am changing it ti Rhyme and correcting the title. My reminder for you…is ! to use soup-mail for corrections Poets are sensitive souls. Pangie With deep appreciation))

Elena Eagle

Date: 8/27/2023 12:00:00 PM

Very well done. A joy to read today. You are so creative.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/27/2023 1:00:00 PM

Glad you and David have enjoyed this, I really loved writing this. Thank you Elena, for your support! Pangie

David Fisher

Date: 8/26/2023 6:26:00 PM

And silly as a good limerick should be, Pangie. He's got to seal the deal!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/26/2023 7:56:00 PM

You are a riot David “Seal the deal”.LOL! I am just learning this form. They seem simple in structure. I much prefer being on. stage than writing humor. Even though it was a terrifying……. Performing is far more fun.!!!!! That photo has much humor in it. for me. It launched the poem! Pangie thank you, mich