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3/202/2026 for Planetary Poetry Contest sponsored by William Kelii Kekaula 

Two Sides of Venus

Your Phosphorus, twinkles as the morning star -
lovely Venus...how beautiful you are.
Your Hesperus, sparkles as the evening star -
how enchanting to see you from afar.

Named for the Goddess of love, divine, 
when the sun is up, still you shine.
If one knows where in the sky you're residing,
he can see you coyly hiding. 

Poets, you would always beguile, 
but now, scientists, too, find you worthwhile,   
sending crafts to sidle by your side,
immersed in atmospheric carbon dioxide.

Up close, your beauty transforms to doom, 
Our probes, your heat will instantly consume.
Is it fiery love, passion, or CO2?
See what a greenhouse gas can do!
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La France Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 11:22 AM
David, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest ~
Crandall Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Thanks, Constance!
Daniels Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Lovely rhymes, as usual David. You’ve captured the truth that duality exists in the Heavens too. Blessings.
Crandall Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 8:42 PM
Thanks, Ghairo, much appreciated!
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